Monday, September 12, 2011

September 9th, 2011

Dear Juniors,

We had a come to "ATHENA (she's the goddess of wisdom), meeting today in class regarding completing your homework. Guys, if you need help then ask me. NEVER choose to fail! If you haven't completed an assignment, then submit what you have completed.

1. We work on revising our body paragraphs. Miss. Davis reviewed passive and active voice with you. We then identified and corrected the passive verbs along with the dead words in our body paragraphs. Students then did some peer review in relationship to the structure of their paragraphs.

1. Each student was asked to review and revise their body paragraph, specifically noting passive verbs, dead words, and the five paragraph structure. THE REVISED PARAGRAPH is due on TUESDAY!